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I cannot say goodbye
I cannot leave you
But you are not mine
I regretfully pull my threaded fingers free
I place you on the door step
The letter tucked under the blankets with you
One last stroke to your soft dimpled cheek
One last hold of your cold hand
I turn and leave
I will see you again
:icongender-unknown:

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:iconnytram12:
very first thought - harry potter being left with the on the doorstep @ the beginning of Philosophers Stone

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:icongender-unknown:
Yay, it is!
You know me so well

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:iconnytram12:
hmm idk, its just what i was thinking =p couldn't be sure that was where u got the inspiration from

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Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters

Want to get more feedback on your prose or poetry? ---> *Writers-Club
:icongender-unknown:
:P

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Into the realm of the unknown.....Gender?
What are you! MALE, FEMALE, McFLURRY!
Or the lesser known 4th gender.....ME!
:iconthewonderfulhermit:
Wow, this is so sad :( No doubt it's darn well done though.

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or a butterfly that dreams of being a man?
:icongender-unknown:
Thankyou! :bug: yes, it is sad, but the last line makes it seem like a promise

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Into the realm of the unknown.....Gender?
What are you! MALE, FEMALE, McFLURRY!
Or the lesser known 4th gender.....ME!
:iconthewonderfulhermit:
Yeah, I guess there's that to hope for. Still sad though.

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Am I a man that dreams of being a butterfly,
or a butterfly that dreams of being a man?
:iconjoemerl:
Ah, Dumbledore. I should have known, but somehow I couldn't figure it out...anyway, nice work.

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:icongender-unknown:
Thankyou! :bug:

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Into the realm of the unknown.....Gender?
What are you! MALE, FEMALE, McFLURRY!
Or the lesser known 4th gender.....ME!

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